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nutrional consistancy of two dishes

The pie chart displays the comparison of nutritional consistency of two dishes eaten for dinner being Medium baked potato and macaroni.The following paragraphs explains their differences

Medium baked potato is a nutrient rich dinner when compared to macaroni , as more essential elements are present rather than unwanted fats

The breakdown of the medium baked potato's nutritional value , comprises mainly of carbohydrates at 35% of the overall nutrition of the meal. Protein comes in as the second highest nutrition at 25% , as protein is helped in building muscle and improves growth. 15% of glucose is available in this meal with other nutrients taking up 15% percent of the meal.

Alternatively , another meal is taken into consideration for dinner being macaroni. Macaroni is rich in carbohydrates as it takes up 52% of the overall nutrition of the entire meal with saturated fats at 21%. Protein is present at the same quantity as glucose at 11% each with other nutrients taking up 5% of the overall diet

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ts are present rather than unwanted fats The breakdown of the medium baked potato...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2256097561 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88571404015 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.345974337 43.030603864 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0583986559756 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017885627132 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399934780874 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528147095715 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914777603648 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments