Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Moving towards the 21st century, a large number of people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about overpopulation in many major urban centers. In fact, it is widely believed that more and more people are moving to large cities. As far as I am concerned, there has been a highly problematic issue, and this raises the question in relation to its causes and potential solutions to deal with. Therefore, some major points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main reasons causing the issue of overcrowding problems in urban cities. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that there is an increasing rate of migration from rural, backwater areas to bigger cities, for better opportunities. The most obvious example to prove is that people from rural areas suffered fewer job opportunities or low-paid work which forced them to migrate for a better life. Furthermore, there is no doubt that there are few universities, educational institutions 2 or health facilities in villages, meaning people have to shift to cities that offer such facilities. For instance, while New Delhi, the capital of India, has more than 1000 hospitals, the state of Haryana, which is mostly rural, has less than 250.
In order to cope with the above issue, there are a number of solutions that could be taken into consideration. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that employment and give rise to job opportunities in the rural places. A clear example being found to prove is that the government should encourage industries to set-up their business operations in the rural places. Equally important, there is no denying that better infrastructures and facilities should be for village dwellers. This is supported by the fact that Improving hospitals, educational institutions in rural areas by establishing modern hospitals, universities, and companies can ameliorate overcrowding in urbanized areas
All things considered, it is my strong belief that the booming population in urban areas is creating huge pollution and problems for city dwellers. Accordingly, I highly recommend that the governments should enhance people’s awareness in terms of this issue. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in fact, no doubt, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 7.0 343% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 965.302439024 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 367.0 196.424390244 187% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33514986376 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08719947283 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 106.607317073 195% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566757493188 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 283.868780488 216% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8161690471 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182261776048 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536082208829 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537692181319 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111535272953 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519223397109 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 40.7170731707 246% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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