Percentage of Australian Men and Women doing Regular Physical Activity in 2010
The bar graph, categorized in six different age groups, presents how much men and women were physically active on a regular basis, eight years ago in Australia.
Overall, it is evident on the data that majority of the Australian people who were consistently exercising were females, with the exception of one age group on which the opposite gender was higher in percentage.
Among all of the other age groups, the 15 to 24 year old citizens were the ones on which the men outweighed the number of women in terms of constant physical activity. In addition to that, it was the highest figure among all of the other age groups, constituting to 52.8%.
Another interesting finding was the the oldest group had both genders almost fell equivalently on figure when it comes to achieving physical fitness. Men accounted to 46.7% whereas the other was 47.1%. This was the least gap in contrast to other gender differences.
The rest of the ages had similarities where the females’ figures were higher than those of the opposite gender. Ages 25-34, 35-44, 45-54 and 55-64 had about 6% to 13% differences, on which the second bracket mentioned depicted the highest variance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... six different age groups, presents how much men and women were physically active on...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...e consistently exercising were females, with the exception of one age group on which the opposite gen...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...o that, it was the highest figure among all of the other age groups, constituting to 52.8%...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...8%. Another interesting finding was the the oldest group had both genders almost fe...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...8%. Another interesting finding was the the oldest group had both genders almost fe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, on which the second bracket mentioned depicted the highest variance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70616940167 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1040538832 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13504101629 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555606832272 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733730476706 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812573668573 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794820886721 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.