Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010

Essay topics:

Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010

The bar chart depicts the proportion of various age groups of Australian males and females who were engaged in physical exercise regularly in 201o.
Overall, in five out of six age groups female dominance was seen, especially females between age group 35 to 64 were most active whereas males in younger age preferred physical exercise more than the later age.
Mainly men aged 15 to 24 did more physical activities that accounted for 52.8%, but for age 35 to 44, the proportion of this activism declined significantly, hitting a low-point of 39.5%. However, for males aged 45 to 65 and over, the percentage went up to 46%.
Meanwhile, women aged 35 to 64 were most active in physical activity which corresponds to 52.5% and around 53% for age group 35 to 44 and 45 to 64 respectively. Moreover, young women aged 15 to 24 were least active (47.7%) compared to their counterparts of the same age. Females carrying physical workouts after the age of 65 and over were near about the same as the males of the same age.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68156424581 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6185806297 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9981446733 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172128844406 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936507805849 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423327023341 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115540008346 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365630249253 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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