The two line graph illustrated the proportion of daily smoking and individual alcohol consumption in three chosen countries during four decades from 1960 to 2000.
Generally, it is reported that Holland topped the proportion of smokers among those three countries in 1980. while the highest alcohol consumption among the countries in the second graph occured in 1980 in Holland.
In the first chart, it is showed that in 1960 the proportion of smokers were 40% for USA 50% for Japan and 60% for Holland. It can be seen that overall, they withessed a decrease of percentage towards 2000, Although Holland once levelled off from 1960 to 1970.
In the second one, it is illustrated that the consumption per person in Turkey and USA fluctuated slightly from 1960 to 2000 and experienced an extremly sharp rise in1980 and a slight decline toward 2000.
Intrestingly, it can be seen from the first chart that Holland and Japan had the same trend is dmoking consumption during 1980 to 2000 while in the second one it can be obesvioly seen that 1980 were the year when the alcohol
consumption had its peak in turkey holland and usa
In a nutshell, It is reported that the percentage of population who smoke per day decline in these three countries usa japan and holland. while the alchol consumption proportion fluctuated in Turkey, HOlland and USA
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64534411579 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451754385965 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.136310983 43.030603864 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.25 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161449037535 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810743135985 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342092433474 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856868837652 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268928958522 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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