Q.1. The diagrams below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to
produce concrete for building process.
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The first diagram demonstrates how cement is being produced step by step. while second one depicts us the production of concrete both process is man-made.
First of all limestone and clay are crushed and the resulting power is then mixed before being passed through a rotating heater. In rotating heater heat is passed through outside. once heated this mixture travels over conveyor belt and is ground through a grinder. now the cement has been produced. it is packed and marked with company's name and logo. And then transported to a building site where it can be used to make concrete.
From second picture, concrete is made up of half of gravel, quarter sand, dace water and 15% cement. All these are added together in a cylindrical drum (a kind of mechanism) and rotate till concrete is mixed up properly.
Finally, the production of cement involves 5 stages. start from mixing of limestone and clay and end on packaging of cement bag. In this process heat is needed. Making concrete is simpler than cement making process. In concrete making involves mixing four ingredients in concrete mixer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... cement is being produced step by step. while second one depicts us the production of...
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... of concrete both process is man-made. First of all limestone and clay are crus...
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... heater heat is passed through outside. once heated this mixture travels over convey...
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...r belt and is ground through a grinder. now the cement has been produced. it is pac...
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...nder. now the cement has been produced. it is packed and marked with companys name...
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...where it can be used to make concrete. From second picture, concrete is made up...
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...te till concrete is mixed up properly. Finally, the production of cement involv...
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...production of cement involves 5 stages. start from mixing of limestone and clay and e...
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...ing four ingredients in concrete mixer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93513513514 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48916424555 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0953870613 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8666666667 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280600271188 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922041292797 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856598713984 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159512683299 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850912659327 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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