The diagram explains the way in which tomato ketchup is produced. There are 15 stages in the diagram from tomatoes to putting nice ketchup on hamburger and fries.
The ketchup making process starts here where tomatoes are picked from the plant and put in baskets. Once the tomatoes have been taken in baskets, they are sorted good and bad in order to reach good quality of the product.After being sorted the tomatoes loaded onto lorries and then transported to the factory where tomatoes are cleaned from stalks, seeds and skins.After the cleaning stage the tomatoes are put in the container in order to crush and liquefy them. During the liquefying stage , three ingredients which are suger, vinegar and salt are poured into it. Once they have been mixed up together,the tomato liquid is boiled upon fire. Having been left in the container for two hours for cooling, the ready ketchup is poured into bottles.After that the adhesive label is pressed on the front of the battle then bottled ketchup faced with quality control.Then it is off the packing, the shipping process starts here. The box of bottled ketchup is loaded onto lorry and transported to the supermarket. The final step is that people enjoy the combination taste of ketchup and hamburger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...er to reach good quality of the product.After being sorted the tomatoes loaded onto l...
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...re cleaned from stalks, seeds and skins.After the cleaning stage the tomatoes are put...
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...fy them. During the liquefying stage , three ingredients which are suger, vine...
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...t. Once they have been mixed up together,the tomato liquid is boiled upon fire. Havi...
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...he ready ketchup is poured into bottles.After that the adhesive label is pressed on t...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he ready ketchup is poured into bottles.After that the adhesive label is pressed on t...
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Suggestion: Then
...tled ketchup faced with quality control.Then it is off the packing, the shipping pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98578199052 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48815277593 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.211997508 43.030603864 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131356549172 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635925939011 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335237264534 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102751026809 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238563745627 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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