pie chart
The pie chart displays different types of activities done by anthropology graduates after finishing their course and the table below provides information of the different ranges of income of three kinds of employees after five years.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that almost half of the graduates had full-time jobs and more than one-third of employees earned the highest salary after five years of their working.
Full-time work has been chosen by the majority of the graduates (52%), after that working as part-time were on the second priority of them (15%). There are also Jobless graduates which were 12%. The same percentage of anthropology graduates had full-time jobs with postgraduate study and were not known (8%). Finally the fewest of them chose part-time work with postgraduate study (5%).
In the table we can see half of the employees who worked as government sectors could earn more than $100000 after 5 years which was the highest percentage at this range of salary in comparison with other groups and 30% of them had a salary of $75000-99,999 and rest of them were the same as freelance consultant salaries (5% with $50000,15% with $75000). Other ranges of income in freelance consultant were allocated the same percentage of employees (40% in $75000-99,999 and 100000). Employees who worked in private companies were almost equally divided into revenue ranges (10% in $ 49,999, 35% in $74,000, 25% in $ 99,999 and 30% in $ 100,000).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...stgraduate study and were not known 8%. Finally the fewest of them chose part-time work...
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Line 7, column 569, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$49'.
Suggestion: $49
...ally divided into revenue ranges 10% in $ 49,999, 35% in 4,000, 25% in $ 99,999 and ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 600, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$99'.
Suggestion: $99
...s 10% in $ 49,999, 35% in 4,000, 25% in $ 99,999 and 30% in $ 100,000.
^^^^
Line 7, column 620, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$100'.
Suggestion: $100
...5% in 4,000, 25% in $ 99,999 and 30% in $ 100,000.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06329113924 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6387997061 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9114759879 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0465121279102 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207567776725 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587090329911 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046702749763 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808915354428 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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