The pie chart below shows the main reasons why ageicultural land become less produtive . The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990

Essay topics:

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why ageicultural land become less produtive . The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990

The first circular chart shows the information about the agricultural land become less productive by the main reasons, and the second tabular represetation illustrates the offerd degraded land in three different regions during the year 1990. The data is calibrated in percentum which is clear and coherant representation.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 33.7804878049 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 274.0 965.302439024 28% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 48.0 196.424390244 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70833333333 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.6321480259 3.73543355544 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1685849453 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 37.0 106.607317073 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.770833333333 0.547539520022 141% => OK
syllable_count: 82.8 283.868780488 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263611618991 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151683051626 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151683051626 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263611618991 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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