The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990

Essay topics:

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990

The first circular chart shows the information about the agriculture land becomes less production due to some reason, and second tabular chart illustrates the offected degarded land in the three different region during the year of 1990

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 33.7804878049 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 199.0 965.302439024 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 37.0 196.424390244 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37837837838 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.46632571456 3.73543355544 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60302683845 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 30.0 106.607317073 28% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.810810810811 0.547539520022 148% => OK
syllable_count: 59.4 283.868780488 21% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 199.0 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.23603664747 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350498660071 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.350498660071 0.103423049105 339% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350498660071 0.15604864568 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 40.7170731707 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.4329268293 188% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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