The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these cause affected three regions of the world during the 1990.
The pie chart depicts the information about the less productive becomes agriculture land degradation by four different reasons ; whereas , the tabular chart representation the three causes affected regions of the world over the given period from 1990.
It is clearly seen that,the causes of worldwide land degradation. The maximum proportion of overgrazing that was 35%.Furthermore, which had been over-cultivation only less than a third.After that,they had deforestation only 30%. Moreover, which was maximum percentage of other nation the figure for that was neatly about 7%.
In addition to this, the percentile of land degraded by regions of Europe such as deforestation, over-cultivation and over-grazing that was 9.8, 7.7 and 5.5 respectively. Likewise, which had been lowest percentage of North America. Moreover, the Oceania was only 13%.
Overall, it is evident that, the maximum proportion of over-grazing and minimum in other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, third, whereas, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39892890699 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.5992665777 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160741953191 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624571847327 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11196041817 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107126816173 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141006546279 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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