The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, california and rest of the worldwide.

Essay topics:

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, california and rest of the worldwide.

The given pie chart illustrating the differences between water consumption in San Diego, california and the worldwide.

Overall, it is evident that largest portion of water consumed by agriculture in the worldwide and then residential at the second position in water usage in San Diego and california.

To embark on, the percentage of utilisation of water in San Diego at 60% while the california is significantly at 39%. It has a notable fact is that, consumption of water in whole world at minority is 8% by the residentials. After that, in san deigo utilisation of water in industry and agriculture is 17% and 23% respectively. But in california its contribution is 28% and 33%. Moreover, 23% water used in industry in worldwide.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 617.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05737704918 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25801886307 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6717003762 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390505655717 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17846436973 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125529883979 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306357761311 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969872410304 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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