The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The pie charts represent the household expenditures have spent on six different goods and services (housing, food, health care, education, transportation and other) in a percentage between 1950 and 2010.
Overall, the average expenditure on all goods has increased except for housing. It is interesting to note that, foods, others and transportation were the main household expenses in 2010.
Housing was the main source of expenses as which recorded of 72.1% of household monies in 1950 and by 2010, the household expenditures on housing decreased substantially where they spent only 22% of expenditures.
In contrast to this, food, others and transportation were the least household’s expense lists in 1950. About 11.2% of household expenses were spent on food, whereas others and transportation had 4.4% and 3.4% of household expenditures respectively in 1950. In 2010, the proportion of household expenditure on those items increased systematically; food of 34%, other of 19.2% and transportation of 14%.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'whereas', 'except for', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.304812834225 0.268076937826 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.106951871658 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.048128342246 0.0759168565197 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0213903743316 0.0366838410393 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106951871658 0.0131127313244 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155080213904 0.155750635184 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0267379679144 0.0379272487307 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.39602939999 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0106951871658 0.0210936926555 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0641711229947 0.0948980150116 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106951871658 0.00967000014798 111% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1011.0 1161.00487805 87% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.9 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.56493506494 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.337110787985 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298701298701 0.247514529752 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25974025974 0.171178102325 152% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.201298701299 0.112407865282 179% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39602939999 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 46.90233065 49.3433353143 95% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2707206756 42.9750493124 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.428571429 135.714022679 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.8701298701 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 3.5 2.94281807926 119% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443401376841 0.418131533498 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186797279864 0.181151798455 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120521903179 0.0850326197045 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.765184426792 0.706616315825 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167492032432 0.157042692854 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254479573121 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945810249483 0.108899403657 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309449504222 0.367819155151 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0996245992469 0.0812612215331 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321672250116 0.316326947829 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637546525449 0.0921553760075 69% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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