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Some people think that we do not need to print papers newspapers anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Some people think that we do not need to print papers newspapers anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

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There are different perspectives about printing papers, newspapers. However, the printing ways to provide the news cannot cope with the fast changing society and the development of technologies makes it easier for people to acquire information. Therefore, I completely agree that there will be no need for printing newspapers.
Newspapers would not need to be printed, because people are surrounded by information and easily shared within their societal group. They can easily update and share information with each other and can enhance their relationships. For example, people are associated with at least one societal group such as a school or a work. From there, people can easily share the latest news each other and can develop the communication.
By the time, newspapers being printed and published, the news become outdated and the information may irrelevant. Since we are living in a fast-moving society and the newspapers and news should be changed at rapidity. In the case of US election, for instance, all the other technologies have kept updating with the process of elections whereas the newspapers only published with the final result. Therefore, publishing papers cannot follow with the speed of society changes.
Printed papers, newspapers would disappear because people use alternative forms to acquire information. It is a fact that, a majority of the people already acquire information through TV, internet or mobile phones for its convenience. Lets’ take an example for my house, my grandmother acquired news from TV, my parents received the news from internet and I heard about the latest news through mobile phones. Therefore, people have changed the ways to acquire information overtime.
In conclusion, the weakness of printed newspapers cannot overtake the strengths of modern technologies and societal group. Therefore, the demand for printing would be reduced.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llow with the speed of society changes. Printed papers, newspapers would disappe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48464163823 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92134221759 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515358361775 0.561755894193 92% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4860527697 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14871538143 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058655793055 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376925756133 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913914028158 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230478675408 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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