As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. Do you agree or disagree?

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As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that school curriculum must include the practice of sending their students to another country for a certain time period to learn their language and way of life. this essay agrees that students must gain first hand experience of another nation's culture. Firstly, this essay will discuss that such endeavours help students to appreciate foreign traditions as well as expand their minds by learning a new language.

staying in another country as part of school lets students get taste of an alien people's customs and traditions. such an exercise would bring them the priceless experience of witnessing how similar problems are perceived and tackled differently by their hosts. For example, students from India can stay in South Africa and may learn their excellent household methods of water conservation.

time spent in another country gives students the valuable chance to learn their native tongue. this serves to enhance their

mind by letting them analyse thoughts in a novel medium. For instance, a student on his trip to Spain would learn to not only speak but think in Spanish as well which adds a new dimension to his thinking process now.

In conclusion, students must be sent to another country to make them appreciative and respectful of other cultures , while at the same time sharpen their brain processing by learning a new language.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17937219731 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57257151559 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2768521236 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238860767321 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103716252318 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760631177462 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135993394027 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607217219555 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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