As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. Do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that students should devote their time to study abroad in another country to learn its language and culture. In my view, I think that it brings about worth both advantages and drawbacks
First, the most important benefit is that students will have many opportunities to communicate with foreign students to improve their skills of mastering a new language in 4 skills: reading, listening, speaking, writing. take Vietnam as an example, while Laos students study at Vietnam university, they will have chances to take part in outdoor activities and be good at Vietnamese naturally. Furthermore, they can also be exposed to the indigenous culture, custom and norm.
However, there is no need to go abroad to learn a new language or culture. The availability of the internet opens a gate for students to expose to a wide range of knowledges, so that they can acquire new languages or cultures without having to spend money and time on overseas study. but we may acquire many nonsense things while we are studying overseas. while we are learning in Thailand, the people there are so familiar with transgender tradition, we will get it to become our ritual if we are stuck in it.
In a nutshell, I think studying abroad has a variety of advantages but it is not always beneficial in some wrong ways. When students are in another country, they should broaden their horizons in a correct way. they should filter out which to acquire or not but they must always keep their native artistic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94140625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67591240554 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58203125 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1037189052 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219570652584 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906108887788 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107064946263 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144846423956 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844452319382 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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