Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, it is quite advisable for parents to show their children the way to become a significant person in the society. On the other way, many choose school to be the place to learn this. Personally, I think we should teach them in the both two environments: school and home.
There are several advantages we can gain when we have the teachers show the right way properly. Firstly we can give the children knowledge and let them practice at the same time. This method has become very beneficial when we can do two things at the same time. Besides, going to school increases the interaction between pupils, help them have more good students and broaden their view to the wider horizon.
Teachers are also responsible for teaching their children to become a good part of the society. They should combine with the teachers in school to bring up their children in the best way. As a result, when our children become adult, they will become more confident in their life and become beneficial for the society.
In conlusion, I think teachers and parents should teach their students or children altogether instead of teaching them individually. They will help their children become good members of society if they help them in the right way.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83098591549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48649950802 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9921484183 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222848920277 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985033938825 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739198079903 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157897402073 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825787361932 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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