As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. Do you agree or disagree?

it is true that education play very crucial role in everyone life and when student will get the study in foreigner country,it might be very benefical for the pupils . I also totally aggree with the statement.
First of all, with the help of another country education,students may be get very easy job as well as it might be very good for the students for get the konwledge about other nation culture, tradition and living style .Apart from that student can communicate every nation people in very easy way they may be become also more familiar with each with. To an evidence, according the last survey from cambridge university in 2015 approximately 60 percent pupils get the good job opportunity because of they know the many languages
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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, apart from, as well as, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 624.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91338582677 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75124261698 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677165354331 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.517121949 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.0 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.25 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100084676304 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451107446762 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383952003078 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735746660601 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271947345979 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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