The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The two pie charts illustrate the amount of average household money spent on five various goods and services in two countries, namely Japan and Malaysia in 2010.

Overall, the largest amount of money, by far, went on housing in Malaysia while it was on other goods and services in Japan. In both countries, the lowest amount of money allocated on health care.

Slightly above a third of the total expenditure of Malaysian people was on housing whereas that of Japanese people accounted for almost less than a quarter according to the graph. Average household expenditure in Malaysia on food comprised of 27%, 3% more than that of Japan household. Similarly, people in Malaysia spent 26% of their expenditure on other goods and services whilst the counterparts of them spent 29%.

Regarding transport and health care, twofold much amount of money was spent on these in Japan rather than in Malaysia. The proportion of the average expenditure on transport and health care made up 20% and 6% respectively, in Japan.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, similarly, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04733727811 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68229492557 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1398057155 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294290242629 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137637605145 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117789007339 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182945696855 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884933312515 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.