The pie charts below show the impact of COVID 19 on existing and new businesses in the United States in 2020

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the impact of COVID-19 on existing and new businesses in the United States in 2020 .

The given pie charts illustrate the covid-19 pandemic's influence on two types of businesses: those already-existing and those newly-emergeing in the US in the year of 2020.

Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that while a large number of new businesses were reported to have positively impact, that of existing companies faced negative influence. However, it is also apparent that none of these two types suffered too much severe impact.

First, nearly half of the new businesses were recorded to experience good impact at 49%. This figure for those existing shops and companies was significantly lower at 26%. However, it seems that the proportion of new and old businesses that have extremely good impact was roughly similar at 8% and 7% respectively.

In addition, 17% of new businesses was categorized as neutral, while this percentage for existing ones was higher at 25%. Those existing one that suffered badly was 36%, higher than only 22% of new businesses. Lastly, the roughly same pattern was once again seen in both these two types of businesses that beared the adverse impact : 5% of the old one and 6% of new one.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, look, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03684210526 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87749567509 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3341384779 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265280046121 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110827557294 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517218830947 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162422376109 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336298778044 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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