The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the electronic shopping sales for the retail market in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 respectively.
Firstly, in 2003, travel sales garnered the most online sales with 36%, followed by clothing and film and music with 24% and 21% respectively, combining for 45%. The least number of sales at this period was book trading at just under 20%.
Secondly, by 2013, Film and music sales displayed a 12% increase from its previous level. Contrastingly, travel sales and clothing merchandizes experienced a dip in the retail market with approximately 7 to 8% regression. Publication sales made a slight nudge of 3% at the same year.
In summary, both entertainment and publication sectors had an increase in online sales, while on the other hand, travelling and clothing mercantiles showed a downward trend in a span of 10 years.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, while, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01022187612 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654676258993 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4095044065 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202259050474 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925301343012 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732152399275 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133680284039 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737170619125 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.