The pie chart demonstrates how the sales in online trades such as travel, film/music, books and clothes in New Zealand varies from 2003 to 2013.
overall, In 2003 travel plays a major role in retail sectors where as the low percentage of books takes place in online sales. Film/music, which is used mainly by the people in 2013 and clothes had declined. Clothes and travel follows a downward trend from 2003 to 2013. In contrast, film/music and books follows an upward trend.
In 2013,travel and clothes occupy more than a half percentage of 36 and 24 respectively. But then after the percentages had started to go down and reached 29% for travel and with the decrease of 8%for clothes in 2013.
Film/music and books had started their sales at 19% and 23%. Where as the online shopping sales had started increasing and them reach more than a third percentage of films/music and less than a quarter percentage of books.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...art demonstrates how the sales in online trades such as travel, film/music, books...
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Suggestion: Overall
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Suggestion: whereas
...el plays a major role in retail sectors where as the low percentage of books takes place...
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Suggestion: Whereas
...had started their sales at 19% and 23%. Where as the online shopping sales had started i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, third, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79874213836 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59525236469 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.343583249 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188137729969 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847876369348 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676335167641 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130800341738 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686995287973 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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