Education is the major aspect, which plays an important role in every individuals life. Now a days there are many oppurtuites for every student who completed their master degree. In past those who receive the degree from university they have a condition that they need to study in their own country only. But in present so many students are showing more intrest to move aboard. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages for this type of development. In olden days, only a few number of students would study and their is no crowd. In present, so many people are receiving a degree from year to year. And for the international exposure so many educators are intrested to move aboard. Studying in other countries will give a different type of knowledge. Moreover, we can gain some practical knowledge. For instance, one of my friend completed her degree in her own country. She had intrest to move aboard for her masters. From the feedback of her I learnt so many things. Their she will get an international exposure and many projects had completed by her. So that he gained more knowledge regarding practical world. Not only those she learned how to live independently and learn the value of their parents and relatives. Currently, so many students are moving to aboard in the name of doing masters but the mindset of some people would be entirely different. They thinking that money is the main part in their life so they are going for masters. They are focusing on earning money rather than doing masters. So that they cannot concentrate on their studies. Not only these some of people are going for study but they are not coming to their home country. They find one job for them and they are going to settle their. So that their home country could forget about one of the most intelligent person. They need their degree from home town. But they are going to another country and developing their. For example, In news we are seeing so many people went their and they are not studying they are earning money. Finally, I conclude that going for study purpose is enough. After they completed their degree they should develop their own nation rather than developing other nations. If no one can forget about their mother country so thatt every nation should become developed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... which plays an important role in every individuals life. Now a days there are many oppurtu...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...portant role in every individuals life. Now a days there are many oppurtuites for every st...
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Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ant role in every individuals life. Now a days there are many oppurtuites for every st...
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Line 1, column 488, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...e of development. In olden days, only a few number of students would study and their is no...
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Line 1, column 527, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... few number of students would study and their is no crowd. In present, so many people...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and many projects had completed by her. So that he gained more knowledge regarding prac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey thinking that money is the main part in their life so they are going for mast...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arning money rather than doing masters. So that they cannot concentrate on their studie...
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Line 1, column 1590, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...ntrate on their studies. Not only these some of people are going for study but they are not co...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hem and they are going to settle their. So that their home country could forget about o...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that going for study purpose is enough. After they completed their degree they should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77525252525 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43138022216 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7941529004 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.2068965517 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6551724138 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34482758621 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296942771056 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887756758404 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820174973947 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296942771056 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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