Technology is the major aspect, which plays an important role in every individual's life. Currently, this has grown up and us used in many ways for observing what is going around us and who are responsible for those causes. This essay will discuss the advantages of monitoring the people's behavior and what they are saying and what they are doing but, in some cases people does not know that someone else are monitoring our actions.
Due to the increasing of technology we can easily monitor that what is going around us. Keeping an eye on these aspects may reduce the cause of deaths and it saves some people lives. Every one, in the society can fear that someone is monitoring us. So they can move in a good manner. For instance, in present world monitoring by cameras is done on roads to see how many people are using helmets and how they are riding. By implementing this, so many fear of the punishmentsand they are using helmets andthey will go in a correct manner. So that they are able to save their lives. And mainly women are getting protection by these type of monitoring like SHE team etc.,
Another advantages are if we lost some valuable things we can find it easily by using security cameras. They also help us in many aspects like how many people or what type of people are entering into offices,schools,apartments, temples, museums etc., So, that it can help to save the place and properties. Cellphone tracking is also used when some people had missed or any difficult situations we can track others by using cellphones.
The main disadvantage of monitoring and cellphone tracking are the users in another country can get our confidential data very easily and some people are also using security cameras in wrong ways. By keeping it in wash rooms,dressing areas etc., so, that the ladies does not have security by placing it in unnecessary places. Some military data is also tracked bye some people in other countries. So that it leads to cause a war.
Finally, I conclude that bases on the usage of technology the advantages and disadvantages may take place. However the increase of technology help us to save people's live and monitor the activities of people in good way. In this way the development of tech outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... which plays an important role in every individuals life. Currently, this has grown up and ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...iscuss the advantages of monitoring the peoples behavior and what they are saying and w...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fear seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fears'.
Suggestion: many fears
...ey are riding. By implementing this, so many fear of the punishmentsand they are using he...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a correct manner" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... they are using helmets andthey will go in a correct manner. So that they are able to save their li...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts andthey will go in a correct manner. So that they are able to save their lives. And ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion by these type of monitoring like SHE team etc., Another advantages are if we...
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Suggestion: , schools
...type of people are entering into offices,schools,apartments, temples, museums etc., So, ...
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Suggestion: , dressing
... wrong ways. By keeping it in wash rooms,dressing areas etc., so, that the ladies does n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ys. By keeping it in wash rooms,dressing areas etc., so, that the ladies does not...
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...y placing it in unnecessary places. Some military data is also tracked bye some p...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ked bye some people in other countries. So that it leads to cause a war. Finally, I co...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tages and disadvantages may take place. However the increase of technology help us to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76020408163 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82005354544 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479591836735 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6284439454 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280568127513 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850944058709 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700158760724 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17382819489 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419614992359 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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