The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and makingcomparisons where appropriate.

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and
2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making
comparisons where appropriate.

The pie charts compares the proportion of housing owned and rented in UK in two selected years: 1991; 2007.

Overall the percentage of home ower increased and private renting stabled, while the figures for the other two sectors fell. The largest figure is home ower which is more than half of homes. However, social housing comprised tiny proportion of all homes.

Home ower account for 60 percent in 1991 and this rose steadily to 7 percent in 2007. Looking at the sectors of private renting, it remained stabled at 11 percent during a period of 16 years.

In contrast, the figure of the other sectors decreased. In 1991, social renting amount for 23 percent or nearly a quarter of homes and dropped off 17 percent in 2007. There was a decrease in the least popular type of homes ( social housing), from 6 percent to 2 percent.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rease in the least popular type of homes social housing, from 6 percent to 2 perc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71917808219 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35796562242 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0752927566 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118839180071 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556805506826 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953481283785 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105704109056 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12284832749 0.0819641961636 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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