Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is a bitter contest issue whether the computer will be the most fundamental invention of the 20th century. Apart from other great invention, I side with those people who believe that this man-made item played the most crucial part in the development of human society over the past years for many reasons.
One the one hand, worldwide technology is a device which has some utilities for all-aged users to search for their constructive purposes. It is immensely helping financial institutions, police department and big businesses to store and use specific data. It is illustrated by Queen university, computers storage contain over 1000 times than library or more security than the mobile phone. Moreover, artificial technology makes it easier than ever for us to access to different categories of studying in international universities or learning with academic foreigners without paying for any costs. This is why education will nourish in the near future with online class. For example, a student can approach a new method or their absent lesson for just 5-30 minutes during the lesson. What's more, computers can easily change their communication style from cowardly to active and dynamic. Students who find it difficult to communicate or collaborate with others, they just spend 5 to 10 minute per day watching how to communicate shown on Youtube or social network introduced by cheerleader or hot bloggers. As a result, they will become an active person in a maximum of 1 year.
On the other hand, it is argued that due to the more dependency on the computer, life is more tensed and complicated now. Children are too much addicted to computer games rather than other outdoor activities and then our future generation is becoming more dependent. A further point is that computer hard disk crash and viruses are like natural disasters and make our life literally impossible. Other technology is not only convenient but also fast to access such as smartphone, fridge or television... will become a factor which is an alternative source of human demand.
In conclusion, while both perspectives have benefits and drawbacks in our ever-changing world, I would concede that computers are the most indispensable gift for the human being. What global will be if computers disappear forever?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18010752688 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86566074479 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639784946237 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0624748947 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.055555556 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142246356839 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423642512167 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364541565126 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917246729238 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390740730366 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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