The pie charts show the level of satisfaction of university students with some of the facilities provided in the universities of the UK.
The pie charts highlight the satisfactory level of university students with some of the facilities which provide by the universities of the UK.
According to the given illustration, sixty percent of the students are not satisfied with the accommodation which is provided by the universities whereas only 10 % of students are very satisfied with their hostel. However, 30 % of students are satisfied with university accommodation and campus while half of the students are very satisfied with the campus. Remaining 18 % of the student has complained university campus.
On the contrary, half of the students are satisfied to study at the library whereas 30% of students are very satisfied with using the library. Moreover, 20% of students are not satisfied.
To sum up, most of the students(60%) are not satisfied with the accommodation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ctory level of university students with some of the facilities which provide by the univers...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovide by the universities of the UK. According to the given illustration, six...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...s are very satisfied with their hostel. however, 30 % of students are satisfied with un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, whereas, while, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41984732824 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.172159747 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 106.607317073 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488549618321 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6338461291 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409502581364 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218889064415 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217421643307 0.0843802449381 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283951036675 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.268495463791 0.0819641961636 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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