Two pie charts
The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie charts highlight the most regular benefits and drawbacks, according to a survey of visitors in Brown Island.
Overall, the high living cost makes up the large fraction of the total disadvantages, while the scenery provides the most common advantages of the tourists.
according to the given illustration, high living cost accounts for 50% of total disadvantages than another aspect. Entertainment is the second largest of drawbacks at a quarter, which is followed by the food quality and weather at 25% combined.
One the other hand, the most common advantages of visitors are the people of Bowen island, which account for 35% of total percentages, whereas the scenery represents about one-third of satisfaction to the tourists. However, good communications play a small role and followed by culture. the figures are 11% and 12% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34814814815 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06630880002 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9709494991 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22878074406 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879242475625 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106601122495 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14208493668 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10539709087 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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