The pie charts show the percentage of students joining North West University

Essay topics:

The pie charts show the percentage of students joining North West University.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of students by faculty and the number of Arts students from countries other than the US, getting admission at North West University.

Overall, the highest percentage of students opted for Arts while Medicine accounted for the least rate of joining. Also, the highest number of Arts students who are more than three-fourths are from South America whereas, the count of African registrants is the lowest.

To begin, Arts comprised 23% of the total proportion of students joining the university. The branch of Computing and Science with a mere difference of 1% and 2% with Arts made up 22% and 21% respectively. Business accounted for 14%. The branches of Engineering, Medicine, and Law are less popular with 9%, 5% and 6% individually.

In terms of the number of Non-US Arts Students, 79 registrants are from South America while 21 are from Europe. Students from Asia, Africa, and Australia are 6,2 and 4 respectively.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (8 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10126582278 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89553330544 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6815394783 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218530958057 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837744364752 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111469513205 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137609649858 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121194337438 0.0819641961636 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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