It is thought by some that its better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people think that it is better to settle in a city, while others argue that it is better to lead the life in a village. In my opinion, I believe that even though residing in the countryside has its benefits, it is preferable to stay in an urban city.
On the one hand, many consider staying in a city is more preferable because of the facilities available. In cities, it is easy to find a job when compared to villages. The health care facilities are more sophisticated in urban areas. The availability of basic necessities is high in cities. Also, urban areas are safe with more number of police personnel. Different business opportunities are available in a city. Various forms of entertainment are also present in cities.
On the other hand, some consider that settling in the countryside as a better option. Villages offer a fresh environment with quietness. In villages, life moves at a slower pace. It is very less polluted when compared to a city. People can lead peaceful lives in the countryside. People feel very close to Nature when living in villages.
Finally, I believe that staying in cities is more advantageous than villages. The standard of living is more in cities when compared to villages. In this rapidly changing world, technology is very important and cities have more technological facilities when compared to villages. In recent years there has been a surge in the number of people migrating from villages to cities. India stands as a prime example with lakhs of people moving from villages to cities every year.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that staying in villages has its merits but the amenities available in a city outweigh them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ted in urban areas. The availability of basic necessities is high in cities. Also, urban areas ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89824561404 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82421050452 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494736842105 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9668666769 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4761904762 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165883262269 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047896110321 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679899041802 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107129342739 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848543135723 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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