The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006

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The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The bar chart gives information about the sales of four kinds of electronic games(Mobile Phone Games, Online Games, Console games, Handheld games) all over the world for 6 years from 2000 to 2006.

Overall, Handheld games are the best selling digital games every year int the period given. Every kind of game saw a significant increase in sales other than Console games, whose popularity and revenue decreased every year.

Firstly, Handheld games started at just below 12 billion dollars and gradually increased each year to reach a peak of just below 17 billion dollars in the final year. Mobile Phone Games, introduced in 2002 saw a steady improvement in sales, finishing at just over 6 billion dollars. Online games started at 1 billion dollars incremented approximately similar to Mobile phone games till 2005 and saw an abrupt rise in the final year, reaching around 8 billion dollars.

While other kinds of games saw a rise in sales, the opposite is true for Console games. The sales figure started st 6 billion dollars and declined slightly each year to reach 3 billion dollars.

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Average: 6.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98901098901 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44087802257 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.358726796 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198640994692 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932543710182 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641050350269 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136587783507 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613816502747 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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