The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The bar chart given represents the distribution of sales of various digital games across a 6 year period (2000 to 2006).

Handheld games generally showed a rising trend with total sales of about 12 billion dollars in 2000 and highest sales in 2006 of about 18 billion dollars. Further, online games showed a rapid increase in their sales over 6 year period, starting from 2001 with its highest sales, in 2006, of approximately 8 billion dollars. Mobile phone games also followed increasing sales trend starting from 2002 and finally levelled of at approximately 7 billion dollars in sales in the year 2006.

However, console games showed a decline in sales from 2000 to 2006 with initial sales of about 6 billion dollars and finally its sales earning reduced to almost half of its initial sales earnings.

In summary, 3 of 4 category of digital games (handheld games, online games and mobile phone games) showed a general rising trend in sales amount but console games showed a declining sales earnings across the given 6 year period.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, so, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94285714286 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43455397583 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462857142857 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8509806193 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.166666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384327411672 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234932762845 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454149466819 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274009489667 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177361360548 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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