In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

Essay topics:

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

All vehicles such as cars, buses, and trucks will be automatically driven by artificial intelligence. The only people are passengers inside the vehicle. In my opinion, there will be more advantages which are compensating disadvantages when communities implement driverless vehicles.

Firstly, societies will have time effectiveness when they have a driverless vehicle because they have time to be more productive while sitting in the car. For example, people can attend an online meeting, read a book, or take a rest while travelling to the office or another place. Furthermore, it can reduce costs because automatic vehicles do not need drivers which means no expense for drivers. This condition will give a positive impact related to overheating cost of the corporations that have many drivers to mobilize their employees.

Then, communities will get benefit from driverless vehicles related to resource efficiency, especially in public transportation, because the vehicles will be operated by a robotic system, not humans. For instance, public transportation just needs a skilful programmer in the control room to monitor the mobilization of public transportation. They do not need driver allocation in every bus or other transportation. Though there are some issues related to security, researchers are developing behaviour technology in artificial intelligence to avoid car accidents, so those robotic systems can learn about human behaviour when they have to take a decision on the street.

In conclusion, driverless technology will give more benefits to societies related to effectiveness and efficiencies, though there is a fundamental concern related to security technology, researchers will find a solution to resolve it.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69615384615 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27763399656 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1570550798 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328622270388 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121471940735 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956511317499 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216151760061 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12569919614 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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