The plan below show the sites of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

Essay topics:

The plan below show the sites of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plan illustrates about present situation of airport sites and their distinct appearance which will take place under rebuilding during next decade.
To begin with, it is clear by analysing plan that, in present duration, southwest airport has eight gates in North direction, however in next year, these gates will extended with count of ten along north west and north east direction due to reconstruction. Apart from that, there is walkway within these gates. Yet, this walkway area will replace by sky trains during next era. Additionally, security pasport control and their customs remain unchange during couple of eras. Similarly, departure and arrival also remain constant with little change in exits which divides into twice in South direction.
Moreover, in contemporary decade, check-in is in west direction includes in departure and cafe is in centre of airport, which will become shifted to east direction in arrival zone. And check-in will rebuild at place of cafe. On contrast, on place of check-in, bag drop will constructed in west direction. Furthermore, car hire and Atm will added in arrival section which is in South east direction.
Overall, there are few sites which are available in airport during on going year and numerous sites will added and extended while renovation which will done in next era.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'extend'
Suggestion: extend
... however in next year, these gates will extended with count of ten along north west and ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'construct'
Suggestion: construct
...st, on place of check-in, bag drop will constructed in west direction. Furthermore, car hir...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
...ion. Furthermore, car hire and Atm will added in arrival section which is in South ea...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...s which are available in airport during on going year and numerous sites will added and ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
...g on going year and numerous sites will added and extended while renovation which wil...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
...nd extended while renovation which will done in next era.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, while, apart from, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23004694836 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54565749075 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.6389111836 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198975270872 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747296903237 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711106387453 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148483247233 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579152938624 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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