The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The layout of the airport that is to be redeveloped by next year is show in the plans for the airport’s architecture ,with many new and improved features added to Southwest airport.
There are more convenient shops and car services added to the airport and the layout of the airport has expanded to accommodate the new infrastructure
Firstly , the current airport plan shows that is the check-in counter in the departures area close to the security passport control area. There is also a coffee shop right next to the check-in. There are no shops in the arrivals section and the passport control customs.There Is a walkway that spans from Gate 1 to Gate 4.
Alternatively , a new sky tram that replaces the previous walkway spans all gates ranging from Gate 1 to Gate 18.There is a bag drop area added.There are shops past the security. In arrivals ,there is another coffee shop with an ATM right next to it.A car hire service is to be added to the airport.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the plans for the airport’s architecture ,with many new and improved features adde...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he new infrastructure Firstly , the current airport plan shows that is ...
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Line 11, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...ows that is the check-in counter in the departures area close to the security passport con...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ection and the passport control customs.There Is a walkway that spans from Gate 1 to ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ection and the passport control customs.There Is a walkway that spans from Gate 1 to ...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rom Gate 1 to Gate 4. Alternatively , a new sky tram that replaces the previo...
^^
Line 14, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ll gates ranging from Gate 1 to Gate 18.There is a bag drop area added.There are shop...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... Gate 18.There is a bag drop area added.There are shops past the security. In arrival...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are shops past the security. In arrivals ,there is another coffee shop with an ATM...
^^
Line 14, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...offee shop with an ATM right next to it.A car hire service is to be added to the ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83431952663 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70688861799 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0794024128 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138971505437 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766543068434 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817284269986 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102007128326 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797776287544 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the plans for the airport’s architecture ,with many new and improved features adde...
^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he new infrastructure Firstly , the current airport plan shows that is ...
^^
Line 11, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...ows that is the check-in counter in the departures area close to the security passport con...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ection and the passport control customs.There Is a walkway that spans from Gate 1 to ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ection and the passport control customs.There Is a walkway that spans from Gate 1 to ...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rom Gate 1 to Gate 4. Alternatively , a new sky tram that replaces the previo...
^^
Line 14, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ll gates ranging from Gate 1 to Gate 18.There is a bag drop area added.There are shop...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... Gate 18.There is a bag drop area added.There are shops past the security. In arrival...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are shops past the security. In arrivals ,there is another coffee shop with an ATM...
^^
Line 14, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...offee shop with an ATM right next to it.A car hire service is to be added to the ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83431952663 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70688861799 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0794024128 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138971505437 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766543068434 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817284269986 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102007128326 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797776287544 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.