Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Numerous advancements have been made in the field of Medicine in modern times. Many are of the
belief that healthcare must be given the utmost priority when compared to the other areas of the
government. This essay agrees with this notion as healthcare is a basic human right and the quality
of many public hospitals that are currently being run is extremely dismal.
The primary reason for people to hold such a belief is the fact that all people are born with inherent
human rights. Medical assistance is often excessively priced, preventing many from accessing them.
This is a necessity and not a luxury, which is required for individuals from various socio-economic
backgrounds. This not only includes physiological care but also, that of a psychological one. Take, for
instance, the free healthcare awarded to the citizens of Canada by the government. This ensures
that every person has equal opportunities to receive the care they require.
Another cause for the requirement of the government to prioritize the needs of the health care
system is the lack of high quality and efficient hospitals. Many public institutes lack the required
funds to adequately pay for and retain highly qualified staff and technologies, and are also unable to
maintain a fully sanitized environment. This leads to a drop in the number of patients willing to use
their services, which further leads to a lack in financials.
In conclusion, people call for action to be taken by the government in health care services due to the
rights of the common man to live a healthy life and the terrible state of public hospitals. If the
government was to allocate more funds and prioritize the health care system, the country and its
citizens will benefit immensely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12068965517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84241067656 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2753817101 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082125928119 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276622028623 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367902208805 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0241321016228 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394665632493 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.