The two map here illustrates the changes in the Grange park when it is first opened in 1920 and in the present.
This park is rectangular in shape having two entrances, one in the north from Arnold Avenue and another in the south from Eldon Street. There was a fountain placed in the middle and to the left, stage of musicians was situated. Rose gardens were available at three locations having a seating near to it. Even, a pond for water plants was also established in the north - east corner.
As on date, a significant restructuring can be seen. Firstly, a bigger rose garden can be seen in the middle with the seating around it. Water feature is included in the south eat corner and provision for underground car parking also added. For children's a playing area is also exist along with a cafe near to it. Stage of musicians is replaced with a large Amphitheatre for concerts.
Despite these changes some features are still unchanged, like the entry points and a rose garden near to north entrance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lustrates the changes in the Grange park when it is first opened in 1920 and in t...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: rectangular
...920 and in the present. This park is rectangular in shape having two entrances, one in the north ...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding seating'?
Suggestion: the surrounding seating
...e garden can be seen in the middle with the seating around it. Water feature is included in the south...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...d. For childrens a playing area is also exist along with a cafe near to it. Stage of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68539325843 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54043176979 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6737466615 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8181818182 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883681769024 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321545533909 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574885158219 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751604391257 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725699745833 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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