Across the globe there is seen that, criminals after completing their punishment often reengage in illegal activities. This is a burning topic that needs to be discussed and I will write my views on the possible causes of such behavior along pragmatic steps that are needed to overcome it.
There are innumerable causes for recommitting the crime and major of all is unacceptable attitude shown by the society. A significant proportion of people treat them as they are not humans, they avoid them and maintains a social distance. In turn, this negativity shown by people results in provoking the criminals due to which they again do something inappropriate. As a matter of fact, a research revealed by University of Law in Australia on these criminals revealed that, redoing something against law is the outcome of hatred received from the humans. Moreover there are no employment opportunities available for such people. As a consequence to it, they do unlawful for meeting the requirement of bread and butter.
However, nothing is impossible and with little attention both from authorities as well as from people in society could make criminals a wise human being. Officials, must ensure during rehabilitation period these persons are provided with the education on human ethics and on any other field that would help them to attain a job in future. And with the availability of employment these people would have a busy schedule that derive them towards positive direction. Apart from it, fellow residents in the society must treat them in a friendly manner. Because with love everything is achievable and the positive force will always act as a barrier to reengage in any crime.
Considering and keenly examining all the above-cited information it can be accorded that, raising a positive hand towards these criminals could help to bring out the hidden favorable energy in their heart. People and authorities must work together to curb such causes and share love and respects towards them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...esidents in the society must treat them in a friendly manner. Because with love everything is achiev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17484662577 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81169901002 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6737924469 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.466666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145309666431 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048570728712 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334884149688 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818956365631 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474893560765 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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