The provided blueprints describe the current and expected looks of a given university sports center after the upcoming renovation. Overall, the center will be undergone a tremendous transformation.
As can be seen from the first illustration, the sports center is divided into three separate areas in which the middle area is the main one and two outside areas are two outdoor courts. The current main area consists of reception which located right at the entry door, the 25m swimming pool in the central, one changing room in the left side of the pool, seating in the right side of the pool and gym behind the pool.
According to the redevelopment plan, a number of infrastructures will be constructed based on the current center. In particular, two more changing room are established in the southwest and southeast corners of the sports center. The western outdoor court will be transformed into leisure pool and the eastern outdoor courts will be replaced by two dance studios and the sports hall. Café shop and sports shop are also facilitated at two sides of the entry door. Furthermore, the gym will be expanded to double the current one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e replaced by two dance studios and the sports hall. Café shop and sports shop are als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, so, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9585492228 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76073923415 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.932754918 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122689522876 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620187359608 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477189412478 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100450199321 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640537809142 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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