The information about the changes occur in the government park from it's establishment in 1920 to nowadays is illustrated by the given pie chart.
Overall, it is clear that in the Grange park have large number of thing has been replace and new building are built and some old facilities are removed from there.
At the first glance, it can be clear seen from chart that in 1920, Grange park, was having two entrance from both top and bottom, in north side entrance there is was Arnold Avenue and Eldon street is at bottom. The entrance from South of park, there was seats on lift side and Rose garden newt to it, while Glasshouse on it's opposite side. As entering from Arnold Avenue there was seats right side as well as Rose garden next to it. but there was another Rose garden on second side with Pond for water plants was also there.In the center of park, there was Fountain and Stage for musicians. However, there was three more sitting place in park two near east wall of park, third in Southwest of park.
Moving further, in present park, there is one Rose garden which is at the center that surrounded by 4 seats in it all direction. The stage for musicians is demolished and replaced by Amphitheater for concerts. Moreover, pond is converted into Children's play areas and built new cafe at the place of Rose garden which was at the along side of pond. At the place of Glasshouse now Water feature has been constructed. Surprisingly, all sitting areas is removed and only Rose garden in left top is remain unchanged from previous park design yet, under grown parking is also added.
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- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others however think that change is always a good thing Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
...ark have large number of thing has been replace and new building are built and some old...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...nd bottom, in north side entrance there is was Arnold Avenue and Eldon street is a...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...bottom, in north side entrance there is was Arnold Avenue and Eldon street is at bo...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...th Pond for water plants was also there.In the center of park, there was Fountain ...
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Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. However, there was three more sitting place in park two near east wall of park...
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Line 4, column 328, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
...e place of Rose garden which was at the along side of pond. At the place of Glasshouse now...
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Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...ved and only Rose garden in left top is remain unchanged from previous park design yet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 7.0 357% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60915492958 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31128380576 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6648706479 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126555315563 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563783321301 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468610996989 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860793905985 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266266370906 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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