the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The figures denote a layout of a grange park, which is a public park, when it was opened for the first time in 1920 compared to its changes at present time.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is evident from the information supplied, that some parts of the park have converted completely. for instance, the fountain which was located in the center of the park in 1920 now it gave its place to a large rose garden.nevertheless,some parts have just relocated such as the position of the seats has altered from the corner in 1920 to around the rose garden at present moment. Despite the all considerable alteration within this square- shaped park still there are some fundamental features such as water pond, smell of flowers along with seating which can be appealing for people today.
As is clearly illustrated by these two general plans of park, it is apparent from the data provided that streets where you can enter the park are same as the entrances in 1920 whereas today another southern entrance from underground car park has been added.in addition the number of both rose gardens and seats has dropped compared to 1920.
As can be seen from these diagrams, despite some changes in location along with the number of some parts in 1920.some other parts have renovated completely. To be more exact, the stage for musician, which was located on the left side of the park, has replaced by an amphitheater for concerts. Other places such as glasshouse that was located near the Eldon street southern entrance has omitted that we don't have any glasshouse, instead, now in its place a water feature is located. Moreover cafes as well as children play area that are located on the right side, which were not the part of park in 1920 have added.
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...mpared to its changes at present time. Looking from an overall perspective...
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...ich can be appealing for people today. As is clearly illustrate by these two...
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... seats has dropped compared to 1920. As can be seen from these diagrams despi...
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... seats has dropped compared to 1920. As can be seen from these diagrams despite...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77631578947 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61818135639 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8768806738 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.333333333 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7777777778 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 5.23603664747 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230488967554 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102467541144 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707429233369 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168495703848 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626032541727 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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