The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

Essay topics:

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans provide information about Southwest airport's current time and how the layout will be in the next year after reconstruction. Overall, many amenities will have appeared by the next year, also southwest airport`s area will be expanded and accommodate more gates.
The southwest airport at present time is quite small, but in the future, the area is going to be extended. Nowadays, the north side of the airport has 8 gates and 2 walkways which are opposite each other. However, by the following year after development, the north side of the airport will be expanded and will have two branches to the left and to the right in order to include more gates for passengers. In the center of the north part, the airport sky train is planned to replace the walkway.
Furthermore, now, the south-west airport has check-in and café where are located departures, but there will be some changes in the next year, for example, check-in will be relocated to the right side of departures and café is moved from the right corner to the left bottom corner, actually, bag drop is set up and will take a place instead of check-in. Another interesting change is that in the next year one more café will appear, bank and car hire will appear which are located east side of the airport.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76233183857 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.568688778 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8168260636 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287129889337 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140336187492 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079706348795 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213353831968 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612145188293 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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