The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given illustrations depict the general view of the Southwest airport and its proposed changes which are going to take place a year later.

Overall, development occurs all around the airport and the easiest one to notice is the area with gates.

Firstly, instead of a rectangle shape, the shapes constituted by the gates will be converted into the shape of the letter “Y”, associated with that is the increase in the number of gates, from eight to eighteen. The walkway inside will be replaced by a sky train. An addition of shops will also occurs in the left behind the security passport control.

Moving to the departures area, passengers will check-in in the opposite direction of the previous check-in location. Another remaining service which is the cafe will then be shifted to make room for the bag-dropping place. In the arriving site, a newly added cafe and ATM will be placed along the wall on the right. Furthermore, there will be extra space which is also a novel construction for hiring cars.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'occur'
Suggestion: occur
...y train. An addition of shops will also occurs in the left behind the security passpor...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...ity passport control. Moving to the departures area, passengers will check-in in the o...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91907514451 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58213986638 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2095096986 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104967078441 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437185501945 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159609711937 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557846575769 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166038733189 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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