The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

Essay topics:

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The given maps below illustrates the airport in the current form and its purposed expansion.

Overall, it is clear that the airport will be upgraded by increasing entrances and providing additional services including ATM, Bag Drop, sky train, and renting vehicles to the passengers.

Currently, the airport consists of 8 gates and a walkway. There is a departure area, where straight ahead is located check-in section and to the opposite of this, is a café, whereas these amenities are absent in the arrivals portion. However, there is a passport control in addition with customs at the arrival section, while on the departure, passport control is accompanied by security.

Moving on to its refurbishment plan, the number of gates will be increased to 18 from 8, while the walkway will be taken over by the sky trains, which will take the passengers back and forth to the newly opened shopping mall. In the departure area, a new bag drop facility will be created on the place which was previously reserved for check-in, check-in will take the spot of café, and café will be moved near the entrance to the left. The passengers who will arrive at the airport would also be provided with the services of eateries, ATM and car hire. The Passport control, customs and security will not undergo any changes.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95475113122 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61858452417 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58371040724 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1473224759 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128564647504 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569959491671 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335567641962 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751430578863 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374951659239 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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