The plans show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words

Essay topics: The plans show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

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The maps depict how a sports center of a university transform since the present. Generally, the redeveloped sports center is likely to be a fully indoor one and become bigger than it is.

Now, with a simple structure, this center is divided into three areas. Between two open yards, the largest area has a 25-meter-pool in the middle. What surrounding this pool are some amenities such as a fitness room, a dressing room and, seats. From a gate in the south, users could enter the reception region and get admission.

In the renovated project, considerable changes will occur in the center as the number of structures and conveniences will increase although people are likely to keep the original layout of the sports center. For example, after flattening the outdoor courts on the right-hand side, to make room for a sports hall, people are planning to expand the gymnasium. Opposite that new hall, two more dance studios will be added in the eastern part. Similarly, a leisure pool is projected to replace the other outdoor courts. Moreover, a locker room, a sports store, a café will be built in the vacant areas which are on the two hands of the reception zone.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...the right-hand side, to make room for a sports hall, people are planning to expand the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, similarly, so, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82587064677 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59221645486 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2750871461 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113213363946 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385563023236 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385768220765 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694632770775 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412642413792 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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