The Processes below show how glass containers such as bottles are produced and recycled

Essay topics:

The Processes below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

The pictures give information about how containers are made by new glass or used glass.

Overall, it can be seen that there are four steps for new glass production, starting from mixing some ingredients and finishing with glass containers. Also, there are five steps for glass recycling, beginning with collection of used glass and ending with the moulding into new products.

At the first step of the glass production, some ingredients as: sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are combined together before melting this mixture in glass furnace approximately 1500 ºC. Then it is molten glass blowing follow the certain shapes to become the finished glass containers.

Regarding the glass recycling process, it begins with the collecting used glass which then is sorted by color. After that, it is washed to remove impurities before crushing and melting. Finally, it is moulded into new products.

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Average: 5.3 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32413793103 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6201995912 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1341454348 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189387342241 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893117081323 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603962275834 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127270164536 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207683516027 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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