The proportion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three different diets

Essay topics:

The proportion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three different diets

The pie charts given below information the proportion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three different diets. Which, three categories on the diet distinguished into Avarage diet, Healthy diet and Healthy diet for sport. In general, most of diet types which the biggest of proportion is carbohydrates, whereas the smallest types of diet is fat.

Carbohydrates to be the biggest proportion on the diet notably for Healthy diet for sport was standing at 60%, different from Healthy diet and Avarage diet just 50% and 40%. Furthermore, Protein proportion is the second biggest up to 40% by Average diet. Then, it was followed by Healthy diet and Healthy diet for sport at 30% and 25%.

On the other hand, Fat proportion got negative trend on the types of Avarage diet and Healthy diet has same percentages only 20%, moreover the smaller proportion there is on the Healthy diet for sport decrease to 15%. All of proportion on the diet was measured by percentages.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, then, whereas, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98765432099 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82119700982 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2741057758 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481725918012 0.215688989381 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255597017183 0.103423049105 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107703710913 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371472377317 0.15604864568 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142855384168 0.0819641961636 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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