Rock cycle

Essay topics:

Rock cycle

The diagram shows the process of rock cycle. A rock is made up bunch of different elements. There are nine elements.
The rock cycle start at magma and lava. The magma and lava come out under planet and cool into gneous rock. After then, igneous rock erosion and become sediments. The sediments go through pressure and compaction. For that sediments converted into sedimentary rock.
After then continue sedimentary rock go through heat and pressure and become metamorphic rock go intoheat and become into lava.
For, that rock cycle continuous process. All mineral are available in the surface.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 502.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 97.0 196.424390244 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17525773196 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.13828899271 3.73543355544 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45737387553 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 106.607317073 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 155.7 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 25.535908925 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.6363636364 112.824112599 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.81818181818 22.9334400587 38% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450323848828 0.215688989381 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179369863188 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158515293446 0.0843802449381 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280180828223 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848240084598 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.4329268293 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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