Same people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no pay attention to it
Nowadays,many companies spend millions of dollars to enhance their brand reputation and increase soles.While some believe that advertising has become so commonplace that it no longer has an impact on consumers. Other argue that it remains an incredibly effective tool for convincing us to buy things.In this essay, I will explore both viewpoints and ultimately , argue that advertising is indeed successful at influencing our buying behaviour.
Firstly,the sheer volume of advertising that we are exposed to on a phenomenon known as "Advertising fatigue ".People are inundated with so many add, that they have developed the ability to tune them out.According to a study conducted by Hubspot, over 90% of online ads are ignored, and the majority of people skip or ignore tv ads. With so many ads bombarding us constantly , it is no surprise that we have become desensitized to them.
Secondly,consumers today are more sceptical of advertising claims than ever before with the rise of social media, we are constantly bombarded with messages from people and companies trying to sell us something.As a result, people have become savvier about marketing tactics and are more likely to research products before making a purchase.Additionally, the risk of fake news and disinformation has made people warier about advertisers and their claims.
In conclusion,while some may claim that advertisement has become so commonplace that itno longer hasan impact on customers, I believe that advertising remains an exceptionally effective tool for persuading us tobuy things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58436213992 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50465627085 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.883447317 43.030603864 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.166666667 112.824112599 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 22.9334400587 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315036454868 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146824775006 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306978208969 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178308008187 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168756308458 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 10.3012195122 207% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.4329268293 192% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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