Same people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no pay attention to it
Nowadays,many companies spend millions of dollars to enhance their brand reputation and increase soles.While some believe that advertising has become so commonplace that it no longer has an impact on consumers. Other argue that it remains an incredibly effective tool for convincing us to buy things.In this essay, I will explore both viewpoints and ultimately , argue that advertising is indeed successful at influencing our buying behaviour.
Firstly,the sheer volume of advertising that we are exposed to on a phenomenon known as "Advertising fatigue ".People are inundated with so many add, that they have developed the ability to tune them out.According to a study conducted by Hubspot, over 90% of online ads are ignored, and the majority of people skip or ignore tv ads. With so many ads bombarding us constantly , it is no surprise that we have become desensitized to them.
Secondly,consumers today are more sceptical of advertising claims than ever before with the rise of social media, we are constantly bombarded with messages from people and companies trying to sell us something.As a result, people have become savvier about marketing tactics and are more likely to research products before making a purchase.Additionally, the risk of fake news and disinformation has made people warier about advertisers and their claims.
In conclusion,while some may claim that advertisement has become so commonplace that itno longer hasan impact on customers, I believe that advertising remains an exceptionally effective tool for persuading us tobuy things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58436213992 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50465627085 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.883447317 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.166666667 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315036454868 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146824775006 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306978208969 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178308008187 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168756308458 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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